A5 · 修饰与比较

凡凡的加拿大小房间改造 🍁

雅思词汇语法双轨课 · 第五课 · v1

形容词/副词 · 比较级/最高级 · -ed/-ing · 程度词 · 中文语序纠错

回顾

前四课接力:我们已经会看句子骨架

A1

先找谓语发动机

A2

两个动词挨着时,选第二个形式

A3

看时间词,选时态

A4

名词要带数量、冠词、单复数

今天不换发动机,也不换名词;今天给句子加“颜色、速度、程度、对比”。

回顾

同一句骨架,信息可以一点点加厚

Fanfan rents a room. Fanfan rents a small room. Fanfan rents a really small room. Fanfan rents a smaller room than Kunkun's studio.
骨架修饰比较
1

Hook

同一个意思,为什么有的句子像翻译腔?

推导

这些才是学生真的会写/会说的句子

1. I very like my room.
2. My room is more clean than before.
3. My teacher is best teacher.
4. I feel boring when I study there.

今天这节课,不再重复“句子要有谓语”。我们要解决的是:词放错岗位、比较说得僵、最高级少了范围、-ed/-ing 意思说反。

目标

今天下课要会做 5 件事

1. 看修饰谁

healthy food / speak clearly

2. 避开词性混用

health → healthy / success → successful

3. 做比较

cleaner / more comfortable / the best place

4. 分清 -ed / -ing

I am bored. / He is boring.

5. 用副词服务口语和写作:really / a bit / actually / significantly

规则对齐

今天的规则只当“判断路线”

先看对象

修名词,常用形容词。

再看动作

修动作,常用副词。

最后看对比

两者比、多者中选一个。

课堂先解决雅思常见错误;少数固定搭配和例外,先放到以后慢慢遇见。

2

修饰谁?

形容词和副词不是一类工作

推导

房间改造前:哪些词在修饰名词?

a small room an old desk two bright lights a comfortable chair
small → roomold → deskbright → lightscomfortable → chair
知识点

形容词的两个常见位置

名词前

a quiet room

a bright desk lamp

be 后面

The room is quiet.

The lamp is bright.

先会这两种,已经能解决大部分课堂输出。

推导

副词不是装饰:它让“怎么做”更清楚

I can explain my idea clearly. A quiet place helps me study more effectively. Kunkun checked the answer carefully.
clearly → explaineffectively → studycarefully → checked
知识点

副词还有一个高频工作:修饰程度

The room is small. The room is quite small. The room is really small. The room is a bit small.

quite / really / a bit 不是在修饰 room,而是在修饰 small 的程度。

练一练

更常见的坑:名词当形容词用

1. Eating vegetables is ___.
A. healthB. healthy
点开看答案 →

B。这里在说“吃蔬菜怎么样”,用 healthy。

2. He is a ___ student.
A. successB. successful
点开看答案 →

B。student 是名词,前面需要 successful。

3. This is a ___ place to study.
A. quietB. quietly
点开看答案 →

A。place 是名词,用 quiet。

4. I can explain it ___.
A. clearB. clearly
点开看答案 →

B。修饰 explain 这个动作,用 clearly。

纠错

比 “beautifully” 更常见:名词和形容词混用

学生常写

Sport is good for our health body.

He is a success student.

I can speak English clear.

课堂改法

Sport is good for a healthy body.

He is a successful student.

I can speak English clearly.

先判断:这个词是在当“名词”,还是在描述“什么样”。

3

比较谁?

比较级和最高级先看人数

推导

改造前 vs 改造后:两者比较

Before

The room was small.

The desk was old.

After

The room is bigger.

The desk is cleaner.

两者比较:常用 -er 或 more。

知识点

短词常加 -er,长词常用 more

短词

small → smaller

clean → cleaner

bright → brighter

长一点的词

comfortable → more comfortable

expensive → more expensive

interesting → more interesting

这是课堂判断路线,不覆盖所有拼写变化;遇到特殊词再单独记。

知识点

最高级:不是非得先列出 3 个东西

明说范围

the best teacher in my school

经历范围

the most useful app I’ve ever used

个人范围

the most comfortable place for me

课堂路线:只要在某个范围里选“最……”,就可能用最高级;范围可以明说,也可以从语境里听出来。

知识点

比较句的骨架:A + be + 比较级 + than + B

Fanfan's room is smaller than Kunkun's studio. The new chair is more comfortable than the old one. This lamp is brighter than that lamp.
纠错

更真实的比较错误:所有词都加 more

学生常写

The room is more clean than before.

He is more tall than me.

I feel more health now.

课堂改法

The room is cleaner than before.

He is taller than me.

I feel healthier now.

练一练

比较级/最高级 6 题

1. This room is ___ than before.
A. bigB. bigger
点开看答案 →

B。than before 提示比较。

2. The chair is ___ comfortable than the old one.
A. moreB. most
点开看答案 →

A。两者比较用 more comfortable。

3. Congcong has ___ room.
A. the biggestB. bigger
点开看答案 →

A。暗含一组里面最大,用 the biggest。

4. This lamp is ___ than that one.
A. brighterB. brightest
点开看答案 →

A。than that one 是两者比较。

5. The old desk is ___ expensive.
A. lessB. least
点开看答案 →

A。less expensive = 没那么贵。

6. Fanfan’s bed is ___ than Kunkun’s sofa.
A. more cleanB. cleaner
点开看答案 →

B。clean 是短词,常用 cleaner。

4

-ed / -ing

看意思:感到……,还是让人……?

推导

凡凡住进去后:谁 relaxed?谁 relaxing?

Fanfan feels relaxed.

凡凡感到放松。

房间

The room is relaxing.

这个房间让人放松。

先不要背后缀,先看:谁在感受?谁制造这种感觉?

知识点

-ed / -ing 看意思,不死背“人/物”

感到……-ed|让人……-ing

I am bored.

我觉得无聊。

He is boring.

他这个人让人无聊。

The news is surprising.

We are surprised.

所以 somebody is boring 是可以的,只是意思变成“这个人让别人觉得无聊”。

纠错

常见错:I am boring

可能误伤自己

I am boring.

我这个人很无聊。

多数时候想说

I am bored.

我觉得无聊。

词库

常用 -ed / -ing 词组:先够用,不贪多

我/别人感到……

excited · interested · relaxed · tired

bored · surprised · confused · amused

这件事让人……

exciting · interesting · relaxing · tiring

boring · surprising · confusing · amusing

课堂口播:看到人名也别自动选 -ed;先问“这个人是在感受,还是这个人让别人有这种感觉?”

练一练

-ed / -ing 6 题

1. The movie is ___.
A. boredB. boring
点开看答案 →

B。movie 制造感觉。

2. Fanfan feels ___.
A. relaxedB. relaxing
点开看答案 →

A。Fanfan 是感受者。

3. The room is ___.
A. relaxedB. relaxing
点开看答案 →

B。room 让人放松。

4. We were ___ by the price.
A. surprisedB. surprising
点开看答案 →

A。we 是感受者。

5. The price was ___.
A. surprisedB. surprising
点开看答案 →

B。price 带来惊讶。

6. Congcong looks ___.
A. excitedB. exciting
点开看答案 →

A。Congcong 自己兴奋。

5

别只会 very

程度词让表达更像真实英语

推导

副词不是“高级替换”,是表达工具

口语强化:It was really good. / I was so tired. 口语软化:It is a bit far. / It is slightly better. 态度立场:Actually, it is cheaper. / Personally, I prefer it. 写作趋势:The number increased significantly / gradually.
知识点

程度词像音量旋钮,也像态度开关

轻一点
a bit / slightly
留余地
pretty / fairly
很明显
really / so
变化大
much / significantly
过头了
too / ridiculously
练一练

把副词放进真实雅思场景

口语

My room is pretty small, but it is really comfortable.

Actually, it is quieter than before.

写作

The number increased significantly after 2010.

A quiet place helps students study more effectively.

副词不是装饰词;它负责给句子加态度、分寸和信息密度。

表达包

A5 只带走 4 类同主题表达

精准形容词

useful · practical · comfortable · confusing

程度副词

really · pretty · a bit · slightly

比较强化

much better · way more useful · slightly cheaper

情绪形容词

interested / interesting · confused / confusing

和 A5 无关的表达不放进来;今天只服务“修饰与比较”。

纠错

中文“很喜欢”别直接 very like

错句

I very like this room.

I very want a bigger desk.

改法

I really like this room.

I really want a bigger desk.

like / want 是动作;修饰动作时,用 really 更自然。

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中文语序纠错

把“直搬”改成英文骨架

方法卡

修饰与比较三步检查

1 找中心词2 看修饰对象3 查比较骨架

中心词

room / desk / chair

修饰对象

名词?动作?程度?

比较骨架

bigger than / the biggest

纠错

6 个更像学生实战的错句

1. I very like this room.
2. I feel more health now.
3. He is a success student.
4. My teacher is best teacher.
5. I feel boring in the library.
6. The number went up a lot after 2015.
点开看答案 →

1. I really like this room. 2. I feel healthier now. 3. He is a successful student. 4. My teacher is the best teacher in my school. 5. I feel bored in the library. 6. The number increased significantly after 2015 / became much higher after 2015.

综合

房间改造小短文:先读,再找修饰词

Fanfan’s old room was small and dark. After one weekend, it became brighter and more comfortable. Kunkun painted the wall carefully, and Congcong chose a surprisingly cheap sofa. Fanfan felt relaxed because the room looked much better than before.

任务:圈形容词,框副词,下划线比较级。

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24 题综合练习

换成口语和写作里真的会遇到的句子

练一练

词性:别把名词、形容词、副词混着用

1. A good diet keeps people ___.
A. healthB. healthy
点开看答案 →

B。这里说 people 怎么样,用 healthy。

2. He became a ___ student after he changed his habits.
A. successB. successful
点开看答案 →

B。student 前面要用 successful 描述。

3. She explained the answer ___.
A. clearB. clearly
点开看答案 →

B。修饰 explained 这个动作。

4. This method is ___ for beginners.
A. usefulB. usefully
点开看答案 →

A。说 method 怎么样,用 useful。

5. The teacher spoke ___ so everyone could follow.
A. slowB. slowly
点开看答案 →

B。修饰 spoke 这个动作。

6. The library is a ___ place to study.
A. quietB. quietly
点开看答案 →

A。place 是名词,前面用 quiet。

练一练

比较级 / 最高级:先找比较对象或范围

7. My room is ___ than before.
A. cleanerB. more clean
点开看答案 →

A。clean 常用 cleaner。

8. I feel ___ after exercising for a month.
A. healthierB. more health
点开看答案 →

A。healthy → healthier。

9. This is ___ app I’ve ever used.
A. the most usefulB. more useful
点开看答案 →

A。I’ve ever used 给了经历范围。

10. My new desk is ___ than the old one.
A. more comfortableB. most comfortable
点开看答案 →

A。than the old one 是两者比较。

11. The number became ___ after 2015.
A. much higherB. higher a lot
点开看答案 →

A。比较级前常用 much:much higher。

12. He is one of ___ students in my class.
A. the most hard-workingB. more hard-working
点开看答案 →

A。one of 后面常接最高级 + 复数范围。

练一练

-ed / -ing + 副词:看意思和语气

13. I felt ___ during the long lecture.
A. boredB. boring
点开看答案 →

A。我自己觉得无聊。

14. The lecture was ___.
A. boredB. boring
点开看答案 →

B。lecture 让人无聊。

15. Kunkun is ___, so people stop listening.
A. boredB. boring
点开看答案 →

B。这里是在说坤坤这个人让别人无聊。

16. The rule is ___ for beginners.
A. confusingB. confused
点开看答案 →

A。rule 让人困惑。

17. ___, the new chair is cheaper than the old one.
A. ActuallyB. Very
点开看答案 →

A。actually 引出“你可能没想到”的反差。

18. The school is ___ far from my home.
A. a bitB. too
点开看答案 →

看语气。A 是温和地说“有点远”;B 是“远到不方便”。本题要练软化负面评价,所以选 A。

练一练

中文脑纠错:改成能上考场的英文

19. “我很喜欢安静的地方。”
A. I really like quiet places.B. I very like quiet places.
点开看答案 →

A。like 是动作,前面用 really。

20. “运动让人更健康。”
A. Exercise makes people healthier.B. Exercise makes people more health.
点开看答案 →

A。healthy → healthier。

21. “这是我用过最有用的 app。”
A. It is the most useful app I’ve ever used.B. It is more useful app I’ve ever used.
点开看答案 →

A。I’ve ever used 是经历范围。

22. “这个视频很有趣。”
A. The video is interesting.B. The video is interested.
点开看答案 →

A。video 让人感兴趣。

23. “我对这个话题感兴趣。”
A. I am interested in this topic.B. I am interesting in this topic.
点开看答案 →

A。我自己感兴趣。

24. “人数明显上升。”
A. The number increased significantly.B. The number increased a lot.
点开看答案 →

A 更适合 Task 1。B 能懂,但更像口语;写作趋势句用 significantly 更干净。

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雅思实战

口语描述 + 写作小句

实战

口语 Part 1:Describe your room

基础版

My room is small but quite comfortable. It is brighter than before, so I feel relaxed there.

升级版

My room is a bit small, but it is much cleaner and more comfortable than before. I really like the quiet feeling.

任务:找出 3 个修饰词 + 1 个比较结构。

实战

Task 1 小句:描述变化

The room became brighter after the change. The new desk is more useful than the old one. The room looks much better than before.

写变化时,比较级常比单纯形容词更有信息量。

实战

Task 2 小句:观点更精确

太空

A quiet place is good for students.

更准

A quiet place helps students study more effectively.

副词 effectively 让“怎么学习”更清楚。

收束

今天的总路线

修名词 → 形容词修动作/态度 → 副词比较对象/范围 → 比较
感到…… → -ed让人…… → -ing副词服务口语/写作
课后

课后 8 句:先标类型,再改成自然英文

1. I very like quiet places.
2. Sport gives us a health body.
3. He is a success student.
4. My room is more clean than before.
5. It is more useful app I’ve ever used.
6. I feel boring in long classes.
7. It is very cheaper than the bus.
8. The number went up a lot after 2015.
点开看答案 →

1. I really like quiet places. 2. Sport gives us a healthy body. 3. He is a successful student. 4. My room is cleaner than before. 5. It is the most useful app I’ve ever used. 6. I feel bored in long classes / Long classes are boring. 7. It is much cheaper than the bus / Actually, it is cheaper than the bus. 8. The number increased significantly after 2015.

A5 完成

句子不是只要“对”

还要说清楚:什么样、怎么做、比谁更好、感觉如何。

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